Wow. That was so good. You told a real story that wasn't just about the chars getting into each others pants (not that there's anything wrong with that)... You made all the details click in the end.
Ron was great and Dean was just as good. Both are grown up but still recognizable. I like that they don't have the usual Auror/Quidditch - artist career.
You're a fantastic writer. Can I request Draco/George now?
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on 2009-08-13 04:23 pm (UTC)Ron was great and Dean was just as good. Both are grown up but still recognizable. I like that they don't have the usual Auror/Quidditch - artist career.
You're a fantastic writer. Can I request Draco/George now?